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This is my Memories writing that we have been doing this week in class.  I found writing it very enjoyable. I have added the image we were writing about.

Could you give me some feedback about my writing, please?

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Jack

 

Air force troop John enters the cemetery with a bunch of flowers for Captain America’s grave. When air force troop John walks over he gets a big shock! Captain America’s body was missing! Air force troop John quickly thought it was the Joker, but he had a feeling the Joker was still in the cemetery.  Air force troop John put on his war suit and memories started flooding back to him. The Joker had kidnapped Captain America’s body and had taken him to his secret hideout. The Joker wants Captain America’s DNA to make him stronger. Air force troop John bursts into the Joker’s secret hideout and steals Captain America back, the Joker had no choice but to give up. Air force troop John has changed because Captain America is back resting peacefully, and all the good memories come flooding back to him while in his suit.